Portraits for my sisters graduation. thoughts?

[BradSut26]

 

[Derrel]

Images 2 and 3 are suffering from green pollution from the overhead and nearby trees and foliage...if you go into Selective Color, and to the Yellows, and add some magenta, you can correct that problem,and get better skin tones.

 

[BradSut26]

Thanks for the tip Derrel!

 

[ghache]

The guys at the office agree.
#1 need more shirt transparency.

 

[ghache]

:lmao:

 

[kric2schaam626]

# 1 is too tightly cropped, and #2, her left shoulder is cropped off.

 

[PDXshutterbug]

Out of these I likes #3 composition but needs fill light.

 

[gopal]

first is very good. yea in second & third colour correction is a must....though pix are charming.tfs.

 

[gsgary]

The first pose make her look very wide across the bust, but the second slightly side on is much better