Potential Take 2 - C&C

[deeky]

I've taken the advice given in response to my first work with this subject. Finally had the light I wanted, calm winds, and was actually in town. Previous issues were range of tones, focus/dof to hold attention on the bulbils, composition and good angle of view at the bulbils. I think I've pretty well addressed those. Closed the aperture just a little as well to increase the dof in terms of the bulbils, but still keep the background blurred.

Let me know what you think.

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IMG_0159a1 by breckmiller, on Flickr

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IMG_0163a1 by breckmiller, on Flickr

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IMG_0170a1 by breckmiller, on Flickr