I get the theme, but your shot doesn't do it justice. You might feel self-consious about trespassing on someone else's property, so look for the same theme in a place where you can walk closer and get the shot to fill your frame. Then concentrate on form, line, balance, light and shade, etc.
I run a bbs. Some sort of thing of mine. This was my direct impression of Hotel Red. In becoming more like what people want. Doesn't it matter that you don't care to notice if this is the front or back?