henryalg01
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Looks good, however not much of horizon here. Like with every portrait, watch your surroundings, this front end of a car and strong looking, bright vertical pipe are distraction.
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take it to isolation... or a long deserted road etc...this is too cluttered
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Don't take it to the extreme, city is a natural surrounding of a bike. The wall and fence looks unobtrusive and they might help in creating third dimension. (Over the time, when you "graduate" to Dslr in situation like this you might use a long lens to create narrow DoF just for the subject rendering the rest much softer.) But like with portrait of pretty girl you don't want "fragments" of other people in your frame or strong highlights in the background. There should be only your girl.take it to isolation... or a long deserted road etc...this is too cluttered
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Good idea...i must take time to go vilage
Don't take it to the extreme, city is a natural surrounding of a bike. The wall and fence looks unobtrusive and they might help in creating third dimension. (Over the time, when you "graduate" to Dslr in situation like this you might use a long lens to create narrow DoF just for the subject rendering the rest much softer.) But like with portrait of pretty girl you don't want "fragments" of other people in your frame or strong highlights in the background. There should be only your girl.take it to isolation... or a long deserted road etc...this is too cluttered
Regards![]()
Good idea...i must take time to go vilage
i'll try tomorrow afternoon thxfill flash may correct those shadows