shefjr
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I recently had an opportunity to take some professional head shots. Oh wait! I didn't get paid for them so I'm not a pro. And I don't claim to be. And bacon... And I like turtles. And I started these sentences with and. Lol! Just having a little fun on some of the recent topics.
I am a volunteer for a my local FD and we are updating our accountability id tags. The tag photos will only be approximately 1.5X1.5 inches at most so there really is no need for perfection, hence the reason they are not in uniform. In the past we have always just used a P&S. However, this time I thought why not try this out with my gear and bring it back to everyone here to get some C&C.
The lighting setup is as follows.
Members were placed approximately 3 feet away in both directions from an inside corner (using the back of a chair to put their thighs against). The walls are a very light blue FYI. The ceilings are 8 feet and white. The lighting is florescent. The camera was about 4 feet away from the subject (rough guess) with a Fluorescent filtered sb700 on a 45 degree angle bounced toward the ceiling (ttl).
The camera settings I did adjust myself manually and did notice that the EV was on unintentionally. I also did not mean to and did not notice that the flash was set for rear curtain. These were shot in JPEG and no editing at all has been done. The final edits that will be put onto the tags will be cropped a considerable amount.
Anyway, I have another round of people to photograph this Thursday and was wondering how I may improve on these photos. I would prefer the TPF give it to me straight, unapologetic, harsh critique.
Thank you for taking the time to look and critique.:hail: Have a great weekend!:cheer::thumbup:
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squad id 074 by Shefjr, on Flickr
EXIF for both placed here so that you can scroll up or down to view the info while looking over the images.

Portrait EXIF by Shefjr, on Flickr
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squad id 087 by Shefjr, on Flickr
I am a volunteer for a my local FD and we are updating our accountability id tags. The tag photos will only be approximately 1.5X1.5 inches at most so there really is no need for perfection, hence the reason they are not in uniform. In the past we have always just used a P&S. However, this time I thought why not try this out with my gear and bring it back to everyone here to get some C&C.
The lighting setup is as follows.
Members were placed approximately 3 feet away in both directions from an inside corner (using the back of a chair to put their thighs against). The walls are a very light blue FYI. The ceilings are 8 feet and white. The lighting is florescent. The camera was about 4 feet away from the subject (rough guess) with a Fluorescent filtered sb700 on a 45 degree angle bounced toward the ceiling (ttl).
The camera settings I did adjust myself manually and did notice that the EV was on unintentionally. I also did not mean to and did not notice that the flash was set for rear curtain. These were shot in JPEG and no editing at all has been done. The final edits that will be put onto the tags will be cropped a considerable amount.
Anyway, I have another round of people to photograph this Thursday and was wondering how I may improve on these photos. I would prefer the TPF give it to me straight, unapologetic, harsh critique.
Thank you for taking the time to look and critique.:hail: Have a great weekend!:cheer::thumbup:
1.

squad id 074 by Shefjr, on Flickr
EXIF for both placed here so that you can scroll up or down to view the info while looking over the images.

Portrait EXIF by Shefjr, on Flickr
2.

squad id 087 by Shefjr, on Flickr
Granted the lighting is not fit for ID badges, the premise of the example was to show the difference that off camera flash can make.