Quick one for C&C

[Scotty Da Q]

Taken during a little after the dreaded high noon with a CPF.
I kinda like the composition.

 

[The_Traveler]

Color is good, dof ok.
Where I think this misses is in the content.
When I envision a sword being held, I picture a strong, sinewy hand gripping the handle.
Here the hand isn't seen, we get a glimpse of the back of it and then an open pal in the background.
The arm and hand don't match the symbolism of the content.

 

[Scotty Da Q]

Thank you.
It was during a Scottish Fest/Highland Games when he was instructing the crowd (with kids) about the different weapons....but I understand your point.

 

[The_Traveler]

Thank you.
It was during a Scottish Fest/Highland Games when he was instructing the crowd (with kids) about the different weapons....but I understand your point.

Getting good candid shots is hard.