I think it's good just the way it is. He's got a dichotomy of lights in the background and an unlighted metal sculpture in the foreground. They are working quite well together, yet there is no doubt as to which takes precedent because the metal sculpture is in focus, and in the foreground. Meanwhile, the background lights are arranged in a nicely balanced composition and the sculpture is not centered, lending some dynamism.
Well, after having written all of that, I'm going to go on ahead and nominate it for POTM, December, 2014.