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[brianfm]

C&C welcome.

 

[KenC]

I like it, but something's been bothering me since I first looked at it yesterday, and I think it's that he (or she) seems crowded into a corner with a lot of empty space behind him; there is a pattern there on the wall, but I don't think it's interesting enough to carry the whole left side. This could be cropped two ways: (1) make it a vertical by cropping the left side so he is near the left edge of a vertical frame or (2) crop the strip on the right up to the corner and a little from the left almost up to that darker rectangular portion of the wall that leads up to him and a little from the top.

 

[ayeelkay]

I like the idea. I just with the photo had more contrast and maybe slightly different cropping.

 

[brianfm]

Thanks for the feedback. The cropping's been bothering me, too. I didn't want to center her (it's a her) with the crop because I didn't want to come in too tight. I was walking and clicked twice, and neither shot was centered, so I didn't have much space to the right.

I definitely like KenC's second suggestion.