Recent Engagement Shoot - C/C Appreciated!

deepsixphoto

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Did this shoot in literally 50mph wind yesterday. They were such good sports, but we were extremely limited location-wise.
Any c/c you can offer is appreciated. Hoping I got closer to nailing the white balance this time around.

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For #1 I think it would have been better if you somehow highlighted the sign. My eyes skipped that and went right to the OOF couple.
 
number 4. would have worked better if you included more empty space on their left side. IMO it would have made it more interesting. They are too dead centered for my taste.
 
Pay special attention to your background when you have some strong sunlight. 1, 2 and 4 all have distracting blown out background.
 
1. You have some CA that can be fix with a little LR adjustment or PS layer. Looks a tad cool.
2. Looks OOF and you got some blon highlights that are a bit distracting.
3. Cute shot. Seems a bit on the cool side as well. I would add some contrast to give it a pop. I would also bring down the highlights, because you have blown alot of the backround out.
4. really good connection here with the couple. Your WB is just a smidge off.
 

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