Recent Pics C&C

[bottumboy622]

Helpful feedback please

 

[Jaemie]

Hiya

It helps a lot if you number your photos for easy referral and just pick 2 or 3. I can't go through all of these, but here's what I think:

#1: I like the tones and colours. Slight underexposure - I'd try keeping the shutter open longer. The composition suffers from the inclusion of the photographer's feet. I'd crop out the feet.

#7: I think this is quite good. Nice colour, texture, and the exposure seems good. Harsh flash glare, however. Did you use the on-camera flash? Perhaps try an OCF or use something like a paper or cloth to diffuse the Canon's flash. Also, the DOF is very narrow at f5.6, hence the blurred rusty part. Maybe go up a stop or two.

The other photos aren't really doing much for me, I'm afraid.

 

[Skyclad]

As well as numbering them, I would also limit it to 3 - 5 pictures per post max. Otherwise many people will pass on critiquing them because with that many photos per post, its really hard to give helpful C&C.

I agree with Jaemie about the first picture. I also like # 3, but I would just brighten it up a little cause it looks slightly underexposed. # 9 and 10 I also like for some reason. A little contrast adjustment would help # 9 I think. Same for #10, but I would try to clone out that water stain or dirt or whatever it is. The rest don't do too much for me.