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proberok

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recent portrait.
 
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Very nice! Did you just use one light?
 
Just one thought - I would have liked the first one better with a bit of room at the top. Having no room between her head and the top of image, especially with how she bends her neck, makes me think she is crunched in awkward way. IMHO.
 
Both are very stylized, and I like that about them. I prefer the second one, but appreciate the dark and moody feeling in the second shot. Although I do love to be able to see a large-sized, big file, the need to scroll up and down to see these sort of lessens their impact in a web browser; not being able to visually 'take in' the entire frame makes the impact a little lower than otherwise. I think the second image could have used a reverse-type, larger PROBE masthead across the bottom, across her shirt.
 

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