The first one is almost perfect to me. But there is one hair going across her face in between her nose and right eye. Other than that great shot and welcome to the forums.
thank you guys,about the hair:
when i made this shot i didn't noticed this because it pretty spontenous,and is PS i didn't knew how to fix it...
by the way sorry if had spelling mistakes i'm used to speak in hebrew [;
shot one is great for me, i didn't like 2 after seeing the first one, precise in the eyes, I'm yet to do any portrait photography, but I like the shot.