Relaxing, critique please.

[Crusty]

I don't shoot a lot of B&W but would like to shoot more and improve. Maybe I just like this one so much because it's my son laying there. Suggestions please.

Thanks,
Dave

 

[The_Traveler]

It is a bit tight at the top.

 

[crzyfotopeeple]

Too close...Too high

 

[Fred Berg]

Not enough contrast.

 

[Crusty]

Thank you for the helpful comments.

Dave

 

[timor]

But anyway, great compositional idea. And this is, what counts.

 

[Crusty]

But anyway, great compositional idea. And this is, what counts.

Thanks, I was trying to have the deck boards draw the eye towards the main subject. I think I probably ruined it in post production. Good learning experience though.

Dave