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Rhona .... for cc

I know it seems petty, but the hair, and line across her forehead is distracting to me. I like the shot though, lighting isn't bad, the focus seems to be on point, nice eyes, I even like the backdrop for this shot.
 
I like it. I agree with Tattrat about the lighting, focus and the background working. The line on the forehead and the single hair that goes down at an angle into her eyebrow should be simple to heal out and IMHO would improve the shot. Another petty thing, I assume you decided to centre the shot when cropping - My eyes tell me that there's a fraction more space on the right than the left and it is bugging me. Niggles aside, NICE work! :)
 
Her elbows look a bit odd, where they rest on whatever it is they rest onb. Otherwise, a lovely photo. I see the line on the forehead...I suppose that could be plasticized out, as so many people do these days,and it would look more perfect, but less real. I think you made some good choice in this image! I love the eye makeup, and the expression she is projecting.
 
Nice concept, nicely executed.
but:
I think there are hotspots on the forehead and nose
and- it is rotated a bit. (draw a line down the center of her nose and between her elbows.)

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