Sara - a first in boudoir! (Possibly NSFW)

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Check the backgrounds before you release the shutter - scrunched up wrinkled fabric isn't appealing, and dark out of focus shapes or lines etc. make for distractions. I'd check the hair every time she changes her pose so it could be arranged to eliminate flyaway strands or ones under her chin (with the doggie who looks like it wonders what she's doing lol).

The last one is the best expression I think, and #7 is wonderful except she looks a little stiff like maybe she was trying to hold her position (and the foot's cropped off and the blinds across the top seem not straight - which was maybe the perspective but might be better w/a slight crop/straigten).

The two color outfit (maybe her choice?) with stripes makes for lines that seem to go every which way when the fabric is bunched. I like the idea of the pearls etc. but could have used some adjustment in position/light.