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Tyjax

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So these didn't pass muster after PP. And it occured to me "hey, why not allow my peers to force me to cognate about whats not good in them?"

So have at them. But if you critique please offer advice... :) Thanks...


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I am no expert by any means but this is what i see:

P1 has great color and the depth of field is stunning yet i am drawn away from the subjet to the background. it is to overbearing (there is just to much landscape there, maybe crop it?)

P2 is not the sharpest, maybe the head is out of focus?

P3 looks good to me

P4 looks overexposed in the tenticals

P5, i just don't get what you are trying to accomplish with this picture ( i don't see the "art" in your picture or understand what it is that you saw) technically it looks like a good picture

P6 the forground takes away from the picture to much, perhaps crop the top so that there is no background above the branch?

P7 is shifted to the left to much. you are cutting off part of the column and that is distracting. perhaps cut it out all together?

P8 Subject looks out of focus

P9 i kinda like?
 
Woot. Good stuff. Thanks for honest eye. Now I gotta huddle with the images and your response to hopefully learn what made these junk. Thanks man! Any others welcome...
 

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