"Scenes from the East" or something - critiques?

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  1. chiraag_rs

    chiraag_rs TPF Noob!

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    Hello,

    I'm an amateur photographer equipped with little more than a D5000 - I'd love some critiques on these photographs. Thanks!

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    If you're wondering, the first two photos are of the Golconda fort, a crumbling medieval-era walled city in southern India. The rest were taken in the deserts of the UAE.


     
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    Designer Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The desert scenes have the most potential.
     
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    No 1 doesn't have enough context to be interesting to me.
    No 2 is well done. I wish the sky was blue tho.
    No 3 is cool but I wish it was closer to sunrise or sunset as applicable.
    No 4 needs a subject
    No 5 is good
    No 6 is not novel. but still pretty cool.

    All in all a fun set. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Nice set, #5 should have the tree closer to either edge, "Rule of Thirds" good job.
     
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    Had not noticed, but that's fair. Still a cool image however.
     
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    Could use some contrast to bring out the patterns.
     
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    A very cool image!
     
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    Awesome, thanks for the feedback everyone. Points duly taken. I'm been tweaking some of these so maybe I'll put the processed ones up later.
     

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