Sea...

[ROb3Rt]

Hello,

Here are some of my first photos.

Wave por ROb3ЯT, en Flickr


Beach por ROb3ЯT, en Flickr


Sea por ROb3ЯT, en Flickr

What do you think? What could be improved?
Thanks

If you want to see more photos from this album: Sea... - a set on Flickr (the album have 7 photos incl. the pics posted here - all are took almost in the same place).

 

[Trever1t]

I'd start by straightening the horizon. I think the 3rd one has potential, it's a bit underexposed, the rocks would look good contrasting with the sea.

 

[Undo]

I really like your photos! I do however agree with Trever.

 

[Frequency]

First of all you have to simply remove the tilt the horizons in all, as already pointed out.
@1: this would be a fairly good image then
@2: I think here you kept some part of the frontal wave in focus making the rst of the image blurred. But unluckily this is not enough conspicuous and the whole image appears oof.

@3: definitely this is going to be a very good shot once you brighten the dark regions

Regards

 

[ROb3Rt]

Thanks for your help. I'll keep in mind the horizon trouble.

Thanks again.

 

[Cricketboy]

Did you use a tilt-shift lens on #2? I think number two looks awesome!

 

[Lane N]

I like the first one.

 

[ROb3Rt]

Did you use a tilt-shift lens on #2? I think number two looks awesome!

No, because I don't have one... it's taken with a normal efs 18-55mm and retouched with PS. The original effect was something similar, I just photoshoped a little that pic...

Also, thanks to all for the commentaries. :thumbup: