Lucidperth
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I did a shoot a few of days ago with a pair of twins, we were aiming for a kind of fashion style shoot in urban surroundings. One of the shots I wanted to get was of them both in the middle of the road along the main cafe strip in the area we were shooting, however by the time we managed to get there it was way too busy and we had to change to a quiet part of a market shopping complex.
When I took the shots they looked 'ok' on camera and we had to move on to the next location. However when I got them onto my laptop the shot is very underwhelming, I'm not really keen on the pose and am unsure of how to give the shot a more dramatic feel that you find with fashion style shots. Being a new photographer I realise that mistakes will happen and we learn from them, but I am hoping to salvage something from this shot if possible. I'd appreciate any advice anyone can give me, I've posted the original shots and some editing I did last night to try and improve it, however I'm still hoping more can be got from this shot.
Thanks in advance,
Paul
When I took the shots they looked 'ok' on camera and we had to move on to the next location. However when I got them onto my laptop the shot is very underwhelming, I'm not really keen on the pose and am unsure of how to give the shot a more dramatic feel that you find with fashion style shots. Being a new photographer I realise that mistakes will happen and we learn from them, but I am hoping to salvage something from this shot if possible. I'd appreciate any advice anyone can give me, I've posted the original shots and some editing I did last night to try and improve it, however I'm still hoping more can be got from this shot.
Thanks in advance,
Paul