Senior Portrait Shoot with my flashes

[jdsfighter]

Trying my hand at my second set of senior portraits ever. I'm trying to save some cash for some good glass, and friends are being nice enough to pay me to do some shoots for them.

Here are my attempts from this session

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I haven't delivered the pictures yet, so if anyone has some constructive criticism. I'm not quite sure I'm done processing them yet. This is only my second run with the new flashes I bought, so I'm trying to improve.

Also, a fun HDR I captured during the shoot.

 

[Big Mike]

In many of them, I think you should have cropped closer. 2, 3, 5, & 6 especially have too much space above her head.

 

[Alf1096]

4 has a biker in the back ground

 

[Designer]

I don't understand the snake and chain picture, but if she likes it, then fine. Perhaps only the snake without a chain in the shot?