Senior Portraits

[trm6346]

 

[clintd]

I like the lighting on the first one...nice and even. I don't care for the shadowed face caused by the backlight in #2.

For both of these, you might want to clone out some of the stray hairs in front of her face, and the fly-aways. I would probably whiten her teeth a bit as well...they look almost orangey (which I realize isn't your fault). And, she has great eyes, but they're not really popping here. They could stand to be sharpened a bit I think.

All just My opinions...keep up the good work!

 

[Mesoam]

did she pay for these?

 

[gopal]

she has good features but needs a good makeup.

 

[trm6346]

did she pay for these?

lol, no. She's my daughter.

 

[Kegger]

I agree on the teeth thing, lotta yellows and oranges in there.

On the first one though, her upper lip needs to be lightened up a bit as it looks like she has a slight mustache due to the shadows.

But I'm a huge fan of the second shot, I love how the back light frames the face. Much bueno, IMO.

 

[Live_free]

did she pay for these?

lol, no. She's my daughter.

DAMN! Feel bad for you having to keep the guys anway....

But on a serious not it looks like there is strands of hair in the first pic and a few other little things that bother me. Otherwise great pics.

 

[trm6346]

All good points.
Too many stray hairs to do anything about. Not gonna bother.
I'm the first to admit that my post prod skills are awful.
I work my tail off getting the light and exposure as well as composition and then the end result fails.

Anyway, Here's a second stab at the pic above and a few more from the set.
See if it's any better.
(on a side note, this sites hosting software seems to soften the pics up somewhat...don't know if I'm seeing things or not but the pics in my computer look much much sharper)

 

[clintd]

Well done sir. And, indeed your daughter is beautiful...congratulations on her graduation.