Shoulderscape for C&C

[Clancyz]

Original was far better in my opinion.

 

[bdavis]

Original was far better in my opinion.

Agreed, the original was better because of that extra contour you see just left of the shoulder, it adds more interest. It could be sharper and the jewelry is distracting, but other than that, it's a great picture and concept.

 

[ShutterSpeed]

I agree that the centered shoulder is a problem. However, I purposely retained the left side in my crop because I felt it helped define her shape. Your crop, to me, has lost her feminine shape. Anyone else have an opinion on this?



I do wish there was a bit more light on the contour but I felt the black created an interesting negative space.

I agree with you.

I don't like the crop - I like the original.