Single Portrait...C&C Welcomed

[Ub3rdoRK]

shot with D700 w/ 70-200vr @ ƒ2.8 1/160 with on camera sb900 bounced at ISO 400. Slight modification in Viveza to darken and simple complexion adjustments.

 

[Lisa B]

I like this, but im not too sure about the focus. I see that it is focuses on the face, which is great, but my attention is drawn to the pink in the center. I'd like to see a little more focus toward the middle but other than that, a nice shot

 

[D-B-J]

i like it, but it almost seems slightly too dark.

 

[Ub3rdoRK]

I feel it's a little too dark as well. As for the focus...I see what you mean but I kinda wanted a feel of mysteriousness lol if that makes sense. Because her stockings are barely showing as well.

 

[Ub3rdoRK]

a different attempt at this...i think i like this one better.

 

[cnutco]

^This one looks very nice! Not sure what the first one looked like... it is gone.

 

[Ub3rdoRK]

Oh crap I forgot I deleted the other one from flickr :-/. Sorry

 

[7/24]

I dig the pose and eyes but how do I say this.... er, something draws me away from her eyes to her chest. Knocking down the exposure on the chest would make it perfect for me.

 

[Ub3rdoRK]

ive gotten other opinions as well...one i found that i need to fix....is the definition of the chin. It blends too much with the chest, maybe thats why it leads away from the face?