Single portrait C&C

[kundalini]

Something to consider on our next outing........

Her near shoulder is too square with the lens. A better pose IMO would be to bring her far shoulder around ~20 to 30°. This would open up the presentation. It would also cause her to naturally bring her nose towards the lens which in turn would lessen the eyeballs in the corner effect. A bit of white on either side would be preferable.

Learn how to properly use a difusser. The hot spots on the hair can be ignored, but the blow outs on the clothing is quite noticable.

Lighting-wise, it's a bit flat. Consider having a black panel opposite the main light source to increase the lighting ratio on her face.

 

[MTVision]

I agree that the eyes are overprocessed. I don't know if you plays with the saturation but the background is far too bright and colorful. I have a picture similar to this - I didn't touch the saturation but the leaves were really bright and colorful so I ended up darkening them a bit. I'm drawn to the yellow leaves when I should be drawn to the lady.