Smoke like a fish

[SoulfulRecover]

I am awful at titles

For my Editorial class we had to create a photo illustration to go along with a news article. The article I picked was about the effects of cigarette butts getting into our water systems and the fish eating them creating a hazardous food source for humans.


Untitled by Shutter_Inc., on Flickr

 

[D-B-J]

Nice fish. I like the idea. Are those ashes in the bowl?

Jake

 

[SoulfulRecover]

Yes it is ash

 

[mmaria]

I like it!

nit pick though, it's just me, but could you fix that wrinkles in the background-tablecloth. Those three lines above and other where her hands are. Everything is about geometry and those little imperfections bug me.

 

[Braineack]

I think it's technically done well adn you nailed the conceptualization. I have issues with small things like the fingernails, tight crop, and the shadow and the very bottom of the frame.

 

[SoulfulRecover]

thanks for the replies. I will see what I can do about those issues