Smokin Hot

[tida19]

Smoke from cigarette and hot from the sun ...does it make sense

 

[astroNikon]

I can't get past the arm and hand holding the cigarette. It's very bright and leads the eyes to the arm which, since being cut off looks very odd and not hers, even though we know it is.

I'd like to see this portrait instead in landscape with her full arm but toned down a lot in post in order to emphasize her face and the smoke.

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[Designer]

It's kind of a cute title, but does not fit this portrait, IMO. Also, the woman's name splashed across her image is a distraction.

I like the movement in this portrait, but it is framed awkwardly, and contains distracting elements in the background. The harsh lighting on only one side is not helping.