Technically the image is fine, but it doesn't quite tell the story, at least not to me anyway. I think it's just a case of the image you captured isn't quite the image you saw. (I know this feeling well; I've been there more times than I can count).
Happens to me as well quite often. As Tirediron said, technically it's fine, but looks somewhat snapshotish to me. No real subject or theme really pops out.
It's like: "At what i should look first? What was the photographer thinking?"
Try choosing an object/objects and make them pop out, or make them tell a story.