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fjrabon

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f/4 ISO 800 SS 1/640 Fuji X100T Shot in classic chrome, converted to B&W with Silver Efex Pro 2

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f/4 ISO 800 SS 1/640 Fuji X100T Shot in classic chrome, in post I just sharpened a bit and cropped.



(before anybody yells about the ISO being high given the fast shutter speed, I was shooting in extended DR 400 mode, which requires a higher ISO)

C&C welcome
 
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f/4 ISO 800 SS 1/640 Fuji X100T Shot in classic chrome, converted to B&W with Silver Efex Pro 2
 
like #2 and 3, but would have liked to have seen a little more profile in the lady's face in #2, its lost is shadow
 
I don't know what impact these have on you but to me they look like a really prime example case of trying to make something out of nothing.

Sorry
 
I don't know what impact these have on you but to me they look like a really prime example case of trying to make something out of nothing.

Sorry
Why?

I don't think they're particularly good, which is why I posted them here. I don't post stuff to TPF that I'm satisfied with, this isn't a search for praise. So saying "not good" doesn't say much that I don't already know.

The reason I posted was to gain some sort of idea of why they fell short. Im fairly new to street and thus still trying to gain a feel for it. I like shooting it and I like the challenge of pulling it above the mundane. It's obviously a challenge, but I was hoping to get some insight from some of the other great street shooters, yourself included.
 
like #2 and 3, but would have liked to have seen a little more profile in the lady's face in #2, its lost is shadow
I have another one that showed her face more, which was more conventionally pleasing, but to me it was boring. I thought this one at least had potential as far as an idea about lighting goes. But maybe our tendency to want to see faces just overrides any "artistic" value in the idea behind letting the face fade into mystery. Maybe this is just an idea that works in my head but not in practice. Or maybe it just needs better execution.
 
I don't see any message in these. I don't see any relationship between those two woman and the graffiti. ... and the woman sitting on the bench.. I don't get it.

Why did you shot these? what did you want us to see?
 
I don't see any message in these. I don't see any relationship between those two woman and the graffiti. ... and the woman sitting on the bench.. I don't get it.

Why did you shot these? what did you want us to see?

In the people in front of the graffiti, I was trying to sort of get across hopefulness in the first and worry in the third that go with prayer. I kinda get that it doesn't really come across, hence the C&C.

The woman sitting, I was kind of trying to get across the sense of mystery of a stranger, hence the waiting for her to turn just so that her face went to shadow but everything else was there. I don't even know if that's a concept that works, but it's something I wanted to discuss. Whether the concept was just bad or more my execution of the concept was bad. I see a lot of silhouettes and I see a lot of perfectly exposed people, but I wanted to sort of try something between those two extremes. I can't decide if I just did it poorly or if the very idea of being able to see everything *but* the face is just not something that can work very well.
 
This is a toughie because I think these fail on a lot of points.
What a picture 'means' to a viewer depends on there being enough content in the image and enough shared ideas/knowledge with the viewer that the concept of the photographer comes across.
Beyond that the picture must be edited so that the viewer sees what the photographer wants the viewer to see. The viewer might be unknowing or confused as to the real meaning but they really must know where to look.

So, the viewer sees in two dimension what the photographer has presented and the first thing the viewer does is true to parse the elements in the picture; he/she tries to decide what is important and what is not. The photographer uses composition, placement, colors, tone, every item to guide the viewer. The role of everything done after the shutter button is pressed is to maximize important stuff and minimize unimportant stuff so that the viewer is guided to the impressions the photographer wants.

Looking at #1 and #3, we see a similar and large background so I must think that the background is important. In the first picture the female figure seems completely neutral, no expression, no definition and she is rendered in such dull, boring tones that I can't understand why she is there, what she or you might be thinking.

#3 has much more emotion in the figure, much more tension and I can see the dichotomy between the praying hands and the strained look on her face as she looks away but the composition fails here. You include fragments of text that don't mean anything. Yes, they give us a hint that this may be Atlanta but so what. Knowing it is Atlanta doesn't add and deciphering the text draws attention.
The praying hands are clipped - does that mean they aren't important compared to her bag and pants that you included?
Plus her pocketbook sticks out and her loud patterned pants draw attention. (and her arm is brighter than her face and draws attention.)

Force the viewer to see what you are thinking with the elements as important as you think of them.
A different framing would make the praying hands much more of an addition than a distraction and her look would contrast with the image of the hands.
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#2 – misses for me entirely.
Her face dissolves into the background and is wayyyy too small in the frame for me to understand that's what you want me to see. The red pants draw my eye, a total distraction and a tone that fights what you said you were thinking, and I don't get what you are trying to show. A change in position to outline her face against the background might have made this effective.

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actually The_Traveler says it better than I could, the crops immediately above now coupled with what you said you were looking to say, they work for me.

the mystery with the woman - concept does work but for me the little crop above says that more clearly
 
I really like the woman in #2 and the mystery of her shrouded face, but the background is kind of killing it for me, because it's just too much.
 
I really like the woman in #2 and the mystery of her shrouded face, but the background is kind of killing it for me, because it's just too much.

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Thoughts? I didn't want to lose the color completely as in some of the above edits
 
I don't understand.
If the intent of the picture fails - her face is indistinguishable against the background, is the fall back to have pretty colors?
 

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