Some B&W of Jackie Girl

myopia · Mar 7, 2008

Taken with my Ricoh GR-D point and shoot.

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kundalini · Mar 7, 2008

The facial expression she is giving in #6 is absolutely gorgeous. That slight smirk and her eyes looking directly at the camera just gets to me. Oh, and the scenery ain't hal bad either.

I really like the composition of #3. Moving ever so slightly to your right may have prevented that water mains pipe from coming out of her head. I dunno, it's a very tight shooting area.

Thanks for sharing.

myopia · Mar 7, 2008

kundalini said:
The facial expression she is giving in #6 is absolutely gorgeous. That slight smirk and her eyes looking directly at the camera just gets to me. Oh, and the scenery ain't hal bad either.

I really like the composition of #3. Moving ever so slightly to your right may have prevented that water mains pipe from coming out of her head. I dunno, it's a very tight shooting area.

Thanks for sharing.

Thanks.

#6 was my favorite too.

and about #3: it was kinda a throw in...

Tiberius47 · Mar 8, 2008

The only problem with #6 is that your shadow is in it.

myopia · Mar 8, 2008

Tiberius47 said:
The only problem with #6 is that your shadow is in it.

yeah looks like you're right. i thought it was hers...

Tiberius47 · Mar 9, 2008

Both of your shadows are in there! lol

myopia · Mar 9, 2008

Tiberius47 said:
Both of your shadows are in there! lol

look out folks, we got a genius on our hands here.

schumionbike · Mar 9, 2008

Number 6 work very well, it show off her facial feature very well and she just look in the camera like she's staring at you. The sunglasses doesn't work for me, I don't know why, it doesn't show much personality I guess. I like number 4 and 5 is good too but I prefer that she's more in focus. Just my 2 cents.

myopia · Mar 10, 2008

thanks a lot for the critiques.
i have never really taken many pics of people, and never have gotten any "keepers" of people. so- as your might expect- i am trying to change this.