Some C&C of my shots please? :)

[clipse518]

Hello everyone, this is my first post and I would like some C&C on these shots that I've done.

These are the only 10 I could post due to the site, if anyone wants to take the time to go over to my facebook page - Tony Colasurdo Photography | Facebook , and check out whats there and C&C on them here that would also be greatly appreciated! I really love photography and want to make a career out of it. Right now I'm just working on building a solid portfolio. I do know that the shots behind the DJ booth are out of focus, it was my first big show that I shot and know the mistakes I made. Comments on how to improve those concert shots would be also be appreciated!

-Tony

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comment if you want, first reply made valid point of cliche haha

 

[jhodges10]

Couple of quick things about your post. Generally you should post about 4 pics otherwise there's too much to give CC. Ou should also number the pics so people can be specific about their CC. As for the pics the tattoo artist would be cool if the Pixar light wasn't gnawing on her head. I honestly thought she was wearing a black fez when I saw the thumbnail. I can tell you now the selective color shot with the leaves will probably get ripped apart for being cliche.

 

[clipse518]

thank you for that! numbered appropriately and commented to ignore the selective color haha. Defiantly good tips to remember next time I post. and next time i'll ask if we can reposition her light so its not eating her head lol

 

[Designer]

...next time i'll ask if we can reposition her light so its not eating her head lol

There may be other ways to compose this shot without moving her light.