some more photos

kornelius · Apr 1, 2004

Here are a couple of friends of mine... would love to hear feedback and or suggestions.

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kornelius · Apr 1, 2004

anyone know why these came out so small? i can't figure it out....

kornelius · Apr 1, 2004

ok... maybe another try...

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kornelius · Apr 1, 2004

third time's a charm

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Lungfarmer · Apr 1, 2004

Not too fond of the first one, but I love that 2nd one, beautiful and I love her pose and the composition. Nice work.

Big Mike · Apr 1, 2004

I like them both. Very good lighting and composition.

kornelius · Apr 1, 2004

regarding the second picture... is anyone bothered by the shadow around her chin? I don't know if it's just me.

Lungfarmer · Apr 1, 2004

Hmmm, I didn't notice it until you pointed it out, heh heh. The shadow on our right, her left doesn't bother me at all, but the one on our left, her right is a bit dark now that you mention it. Still great pics though. I think I know what it is about the top one now that threw me off. It's like I almost want to see her elbow (at the top) either cut off or to show more wall above it. But I don't know... heh heh. I'm a bad one to offer critiques, I'm still a noob and have had no luck with photographing humans, heh heh.