Some park photos from this weekend's shoot!

[ToviTorio]

What do you guys think!?

 

[Samerr9]

I LOVE the last one! Great expression and composition.. My only point, if you warm the flash light in post a bit to match the BG. Great work.. Keep it up

 

[tirediron]

I think I see mis-corrected WB; there appears to be a green cast to most of the skin, the faces seem under-exposed and the expressions, especially of the girl in the white top make me think that you've just told her that she's going to be beaten when she gets home.

I would suggest using longer glass with a larger aperture to more effectively isolate the subject from the background, and especially in #2, put more separation between the two. I would also like too the exposure increased slightly for all three.

 

[spacefuzz]

I agree with tirediron, the expressions look like she is really nervous.

 

[ToviTorio]

I think I see mis-corrected WB; there appears to be a green cast to most of the skin, the faces seem under-exposed and the expressions, especially of the girl in the white top make me think that you've just told her that she's going to be beaten when she gets home.

I would suggest using longer glass with a larger aperture to more effectively isolate the subject from the background, and especially in #2, put more separation between the two. I would also like too the exposure increased slightly for all three.

Thanks for the feed back!Yeah I used a 17-50 2.8 should I definitely need to invest in a 70-200 2.8, any suggestion on getting better exposures on the face?

 

[Parker219]

Awwww, that little girl lost her mommy. She looks sad. As far as better exposure, I think you definetly need some flash for these pictures, and they were shot in the shade.

 

[Tony S]

Go easier on the vignette, it should be subtle, not standing out making you look to see what's in the darkened areas.

 

[ToviTorio]

Thanks for the critique guys! I'll make sure to apply these to my next shoot!

 

[rexbobcat]

Have you thought about investing in some rather inexpensive gels for what I assume is some kind of speedlight? It would help to warm up their sin and make them feel a little more "alive" and cheery instead of cold and grey.

You can warm t up somewhat with white balance but that also affects the other colors and tones in your image as well as opposed to a gel, which only affects the flash-lit area.