I like your idea but not necessarily the execution. The boutique building at the bottom completely overtakes the tower as the centre of attention. Also, the sky (which takes up 50% of the area of the image that's not black border) is as bland as it can be I suggest either trying this shot on a day where there are clouds in the sky or otherwise try to reduce the area that the sky will take.
Just my two cents. Like I said, I like what you had in mind. In fact, while you are there you might want to try shooting the building of the Experience Music Project with this lens and see what you can come up with.