Spawn!

[Lord_Angelus]

 

[Rob]

Firstly, you should probably have quick read of the Critique guidelines:
http://thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31052

I quite like your image, but I think that it could benefit from some heavy photoshopping to make it more surreal and to make the viewer question whether it's a person in costume, or a model. At the moment it looks like a reasonably well painted model, but the slightest of errors become glaring with such close-up action. Also, there's bit of fluff on his head!

Rob