Stephanie C&C

[ang1995]

These are some pictures that I did of my sister last night.

Please critique composition and lighting!


#1

#2

#3

#4

 

[margosoriginals]

I like #3 the best. In #1, her skin tone looks weird to me, but it may just be my monitor, same for #2. #4 is too tilted so the trees look weird IMO.

 

[Robin Usagani]

I like 1 & 2. Not sure if the tilts work on 3 & 4. Lighting is good.

 

[ang1995]

I like #3 the best. In #1, her skin tone looks weird to me, but it may just be my monitor, same for #2. #4 is too tilted so the trees look weird IMO.

Thanks for the critique! I didn't really notice the skin tone being weird. I can deff see what you are saying about #4!

 

[ang1995]

I like 1 & 2. Not sure if the tilts work on 3 & 4. Lighting is good.

Thanks Schwettylens!!

 

[Tee]

The tilt doesn't work for me in 3 but it does work for me in 4 -although the vignette in 4 seems a little too dark.

 

[ang1995]

The tilt doesn't work for me in 3 but it does work for me in 4 -although the vignette in 4 seems a little too dark.

I see what you mean about the vignette on #4! Sometimes I think I tent to overdo it without noticing until later even though I don't like it.

 

[Ron Evers]

With #1, I find the bottom half of her body very distracting, I am inclined to crop to a head shot & warm up the image a bit.

 

[ang1995]

With #1, I find the bottom half of her body very distracting, I am inclined to crop to a head shot & warm up the image a bit.

I started to crop it kinda like you did but she was sitting here with me and saw it and did not like it so I just went with what she liked. I do agree with you though.... her feet are kinda distracting to me too.