Good vision you had there. Two things I would change about this image.
1- Boost the mid so it looks less digital. But be very careful there because the image is dark to start with.
2- You have a composition problem. This image should be square and not rectangle. I would keep the width and make the height the same by cropping from the bottom up. This will eliminate the distracting components in the lower part of the image, put the subject (the eyes) in the middle of the image which the square format will accentuate, and it will live the vertical division off centered to a satisfying proportion.
I would do it and it post it here to compare if you would agree to it.
All the best,