ronanphilip
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Had to do a small assignment for photography class. Tell a story with 5 to 6 photos. Here is what two of us came up with. c&c welcome, take it easy remember were only beginers
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i LOVE the combination of this phrase and your avatar.where's the blood?
yea prob should have put it in the just for fun sectionMaybe it's just my weird sense of humor, but I cracked up.
was the first thing poped into my head, had a lot of stuff to do in other subjects so we were under pressure hence the storyand the story rather poor, imo.
seriously, this one could be better, to me story telling in pic is like reading a comic book in a way. if you notice all 5 pic you used props except pic 6. thats why " where's the blood " that could've finish it up.
PS. spaceman Iam no vampire but i like blood pudding lol..
if i was to take these again what would you do to improve them?
this is just a suggestion ok, i am not saying, the existing picture are not good, it just needs a tad of finising touches and direction to me at least.
UNDER PRESSURE!
pic #1. you can add a few books to your props.
pic #2. add somebody ( with a facial expression but dont over do it) with her holding paperworks ( anything will do ) or explanning something. those crumpled paper, its distracting.
pic #3. again, it like food with out taste. props, few paper, books, coffe mug, take out food ( pizza what ever ) and wall clock that say's 3 am or some thing, its up to you. oh, one more thing she should be talking on the phone if you want.
pic #4. this one is fine, but the text say's use the other door, you might consider replacing it with OUT FOR LUNCH.. lol
pic #5 i like your intention but there is no movement, i mean if you look closely, her hair are all pointing straight down same with her jacket ( unpi the jacket), you can use a fan to blow out her hair to fake falling down.
pic #5. the ending. her position to me is to stage and to neat!
AGAIN, WHERE'S THE BLOOD!!!!!! AND IF YOU CAN USE SELECTIVE COLORING USE IT FOR THE BLOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!
PS; WATCH A HORROR MOVE OR SUSPENCE.
HOPE THIS HELPS..