Street Light Couple

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Most recent photo that I took while at a bar in dallas. Any critique?
 

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I think it could seriously do with a crop to get rid of dead space, and emphasize the three main items in the image.

maybe like this..

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I find the angle you shot at to be the biggest issue. IMO it kills the implied romance, subjugates them, and almost makes it seem like they are fleeing from you.
 

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I find the angle you shot at to be the biggest issue. IMO it kills the implied romance, subjugates them, and almost makes it seem like they are fleeing from you.

I agree. It's very impersonal, for a personal title line. It just looks like a sot taken of a couple on street level, from a second/third, story window.
 

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Stalker 101, classes held every week night. Don't miss your shot!

Sorry... j/k....
 

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Stalker 101, classes held every week night. Don't miss your shot!

Sorry... j/k....

Hey.. at least there are no crosshairs, that WOULD be scary! lol!
 

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I think it's an interesting picture, but I wish the highlights on the man's shirt and on the sidewalk weren't quite so hot.
 

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Looks better with the crop. Kinda bugs how the man is out of focus. But not a horrible picture at all to me.
 
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Lol low key it does kind of look weird now hahaha. Would it have been a better choice? Or is it the downward shot that makes it look awkward?
 

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