Street Photography

[Fishytrick]

Hello everyone! My name is Wu Gang Ng (yes i'm a chinese but I barely speak mandarin), and I'm very new to this forum
I'm from Singapore. I have a Nikon D300s. I primarily use my 35mm 1.4G. But I do have a 18-55, 55-200 and a manual 50mm 1.2.

I love to share my works to you guys. Below are my accounts.
Flickr Stream: Flickr: ngwugang's Photostream
500PX Stream: 500px / Wu Gang Ng
I would also love to hear feedback from all of you. Thanks!!

[1] - 500px / Photo "Yeah, it was a bril idea!" by Wu Gang Ng

[2] - 500px / Photo "Wut you lookin' at?" by Wu Gang Ng

[3] - 500px / Untitled photo by Wu Gang Ng

[4] - 500px / Photo "Laksa Uncle" by Wu Gang Ng

[5] - http://500px.com/photo/1645753

 

[The_Traveler]

Welcome Fishytrick,
It's nice to see someone who says they are shooting street stuff and actually doing it.

I like this one the most but, IMO, it is poorly framed.
I think that the viewer needs to be shown what to look at and doesn't need to roam the frame, fighting off bright areas and distractions.
I suggest you consider a tighter crop to put the two important things - her glasses and whatever that is she is holding at the important spots and trim away all that rest that doesn't impact the shot.

Additionally, her head is clipped and the amount of loose space at the sides gives the impression that is was a missed framing. Trimming it and making it all tight removes that impression.