Studio Boudoir : Leslie ***NSFW*** C&C desired

[Geaux]

Beautiful muse, but I have a feeling with her skin tone, hair color, and red lingerie, that its coming off a tad warm for me.

Could totally be the look you're going for but its just something that stands out for me.

 

[Rags]

Bill you asked for C&C...

Technically they are excellent.

The model lacks emotion and mood (although her wonder bra is wonderful)

If partial undress and sultry poses attempts a viewers sensual response, these images miss

The photography is excellent however.

Rags

 

[MitchStrp]

Nailed it!

Lucky :hail:

 

[Trever1t]

thanks for the critique!

Geaux: One of the most recurrent critique I get is that my images are blue. I do prefer a cooler look but I've been pushing the warmth a bit. I go with what looks good to my eye and then bump it and since I started doing that nobody has said my girls look blue

Rags: Thanks!

 

[Trever1t]

One last addition,


_POR1234-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

A bit more contrast
A bit less warmth

 

[frommrstomommy]

Gorgeous as always but she seems rather orange to me? Is that just me?

 

[Trever1t]

Gorgeous as always but she seems rather orange to me? Is that just me?

My attempt at a 50s look

 

[Jetmugg]

I think the last one is the "Winner" of the bunch. Beautiful model, great photography.

The expressions on her face make it seem like she's not 100% comfortable and confident, which is the only thing I can see that would make these photos even better.

Steve.

 

[Trever1t]

Thank you. I kinda like the one where she's on her back with her hair spread out. Last one is a bit more contrast.

 

[Rosy]

2 is my favorite - this is not weird, right??

 

[sk66]

For me, the third image feels the most "natural." The bright spot does need a little work.
IMO, the pulling of the shirt across in all of the images makes the set a bit "awkward." I think it would probably have been better to just button it a bit.

The lean in the last one is a bit much.