Studio portraits

[photographedmemories]

I'd really like some honest feedback on these photos. Thanks!

#1

#2

 

[MyaLover]

Cute, kinda remind me or pin ups a little

 

[kidchill]

I think it was a good job. I think the lighting may be a little too harsh. In the first, the colors are great where the light is blocked a little and the second seems just a bit blown out. I have no experience with portraits, so, like I said, NICE JOB!! I just set up a studio and I'm shooting later this week, so we'll see what happens! Keep up the good work!

 

[returnofa5i]

the first one has way too much head room, i'd like a tighter frame, imo. 2 looks like she's standing in nothing smack dab in the middle of the frame. maybe change that up idk

 

[jenncolang]

i like them also... maybe a little to hot on the left for the first one?

did you do any pping on them? the colors are really nice

 

[photographedmemories]

i like them also... maybe a little to hot on the left for the first one?

did you do any pping on them? the colors are really nice

Yes, I did do minor pp on them, just a little extra contrast but not much at all. Thanks.

 

[photographedmemories]

I think it was a good job. I think the lighting may be a little too harsh. In the first, the colors are great where the light is blocked a little and the second seems just a bit blown out. I have no experience with portraits, so, like I said, NICE JOB!! I just set up a studio and I'm shooting later this week, so we'll see what happens! Keep up the good work!

Actually, the first photo was shot in complete natural lighting, just some very minor pping to up the contrast slightly. Maybe I added too much?
Thanks for the comment.

 

[photographedmemories]

the first one has way too much head room, i'd like a tighter frame, imo. 2 looks like she's standing in nothing smack dab in the middle of the frame. maybe change that up idk

I'll take note of that. Thanks.

 

[photographedmemories]

Cute, kinda remind me or pin ups a little

Thanks. That's actually a great compliment, seeing as I plan to use this model for some future pinup style photos.