Those three dots at the bottom of your first photo could easily be cloned out in PS, that shouldn't be a problem, and the rays can also be made show more by playing with the levels or the curves. There is more in that photo than meets the eye right now.
You say it is ok to edit your pics? So I might like to have a go at that cloud, if I may?
The second photo is a wonderful concept but it somehow feels as if the dynamic range was too much for your camera: the window now is too bright and much of the inside of the cabin still is too dark. Very tricky exposure. I remember me trying to get something similar when I was in England at the end of August of last year ... I don't think any of my attempts worked out ... if you are interested, I might still look for the photo that I am having in mind.