Sunsets - Feedback wanted

[manaheim]

No, but I do expect a photography forum to give me feedback on my photos. Perhaps that is too much of me to ask for.

Here is what I recommend.

Step 1. Logout
Step 2. Erase your account here
Step 3. Create a new one
Step 4. Select some different pictures and adjust your watermark
Step 5. Post them and pretend like you're not you

Why?

Because basically you just walked in here and pissed in everyone's cheerios on all your first posts and nobody here is going to give you the time of day ever again.

We're all more than capable of commenting on pictures with or without watermarks, but as a culture we generally suggest that people try to keep them unobtrusive enough so that we are able to look at the image without ridiculous distraction.

If you'd like us to just give you commentary on your pictures as they are, fine... here... let me start...

Your pictures seem fine but you keep including this hideous thing in the sky in the dead center of all your shots. Seems almost like an ad or something. Maybe you should try the shoot again... only this time try to keep giant ads out of the composition. Just a suggestion. Thanks for posting and welcome to TPF!

How's that? Work for you?

Next.

 

[Swerve142]

You two are right, I should take out the dead space to focus more on the color. That would definitely help

 

[KmH]

Do you understand how many people out here in internet land avoid the 'Deviant Art' web site just because of it's name? Think about it.

"Yes, ma'am. You and your children can can see and buy all of my sunset photos at Deviant Art . com."