I would have liked to have seen the detail on the horn/strobe. The portion that is in the shadows is actually the voice annunicaiton portion and is a section of the unit filled with horizontal lines since it is the speaker. That horn/stobe would have been a perfect focal point for this shot.
if you were to clone out the hanging conduit on the far right, and up the saturation a bit on the red plate... I would like it better! It would almost be like a selective color shot, since the rest of the frame is basically monochromatic.
Makes me think of FIRE as a verb for some reason.. the geometrics are interesting, almost lulling... and then boom... FIRE! ( or am I full of it? I know that is a dangerous question to put forth on this forum.. but hey.... )