Take a ride on my tractor - C&C

[Scuba]

Here are a few shots from this morning of an old tractor we are getting rid of and had moved out into the sun. C&C Please.

#1

Proud by photodoc11, on Flickr

#2

Ferguson 165 by photodoc11, on Flickr

#3

Old Tractor by photodoc11, on Flickr

 

[Frequency]

I like the first one and second...

 

[Scuba]

Thanks Frequency. Any feedback or thoughts?

 

[Frequency]

The lighting on "FERGUSON' and its 'fade to sharp' change is fine... but in the third, you missed to keep similar writing in focus.... here you should have moved a bit more to left to make those letters partially visible

 

[Bossy]

I think they are only a small part of a whole. As far as detail pictures go, they are ok.

 

[Scuba]

I think they are only a small part of a whole. As far as detail pictures go, they are ok.

Are you saying the set would have been better with a full shot of the tractor?

 

[Scuba]

Here is a full shot of the tractor.

#4

Take a Ride by photodoc11, on Flickr

 

[Bossy]

Thats great!

 

[Scuba]

Thats great!

Thanks! I think you were right a full shot gives the others context. I was trying to keep it to just a few photos and #4 should have been in the original.

 

[Scuba]

How did I do with the B&W conversions? Any ways I could have improved these images?

 

[Bo4key]

Number 3 is my favourite. I usually prefer black and white but I love the color in this one. And the fact that it is a detail photo but also shows the majority of the tractor in the bokeh makes it a great shot IMO.

 

[Scuba]

Number 3 is my favourite. I usually prefer black and white but I love the color in this one. And the fact that it is a detail photo but also shows the majority of the tractor in the bokeh makes it a great shot IMO.

Thank you. I agree the color adds some feeling of age to the image IMO.

 

[Scuba]

I would really like some input one way or the other on the conversions etc. I do appreciate the previous comments but I would like comments to help me improve.