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ShaySolomon

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Hi, i'll be happy to hear your opinion on this one. especially about the composition.

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I think if the light was different, this would be a very good composition. As it, however, your subject is sitting in shade, as as such he blends into the water background. The buildings on the left edge are so brightly illuminated that the left edge is demanding a significantly higher proportion of the attention.
 
Unfortunately the artist is a bit lost in the shadows. Next time use a fill flash and this time ... lighten the shadows up in post. The composition is nice, but less sky and more of the artist.It appears you framed the top of the image to include the street light (upper left). But in order to get the lamp in the shot you have to include more sky than necessary. This framing is fine, but cropping in from the left right and top will give you slightly different looks. Not necessarily good or bad, but just different.
 

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