The Door

[jaomul]

The entry by jaomul, on Flickr

 

[BRM]

"The Door" i get it. The Door. Excellent imagination you have there. the door

 

[BRM]

here's my, 'the door

 

[12sndsgood]

shot thru a car window with the mirror in the shot, nice.

 

[jaomul]

Unhelpful criticism. Why did Ye even bother? Wouldn't mind being ripped apart constructively. Thanks

 

[CMfromIL]

I'd either crop out the weathervane/cross/lightning rod on the roof. You missed 1/2 of it and it's rather distracting. Either get it all in the shot or not.

That being said...it's a door. I don't really see what is interesting or engaging about it.

 

[Steve01]

How about emphasizing the "door".
The whole thing is to bright and too wide IMHO.


I hope you don't mind.

 

[jaomul]

How about emphasizing the "door".
The whole thing is to bright and too wide IMHO.


I hope you don't mind.

You definetly improved it over my effert

 

[jaomul]

I'd either crop out the weathervane/cross/lightning rod on the roof. You missed 1/2 of it and it's rather distracting. Either get it all in the shot or not.

That being said...it's a door. I don't really see what is interesting or engaging about it.

I agree its not very interesting. I took a few local pictures for a project and a few people liked this (or at least said so). I just wanted an outsider opinion. Thanks

 

[12sndsgood]

Unhelpful criticism. Why did Ye even bother? Wouldn't mind being ripped apart constructively. Thanks

was this meant for me? if so my reply wasn't about your photo. it was about the troll above me who posted the crappy pic of a door.

 

[jaomul]

Unhelpful criticism. Why did Ye even bother? Wouldn't mind being ripped apart constructively. Thanks

was this meant for me? if so my reply wasn't about your photo. it was about the troll above me who posted the crappy pic of a door.

Sorry about that, originally meant for both but I see now what you meant, thanks

 

[pathoulihan1]

"The Door" i get it. The Door. Excellent imagination you have there. the door

But the bricks really are bricks not nodrod!!!!

Eventually Gandalf will turn you to stone!


OP I think if your intent was to capture the architecture you did that nicely, but I agree that a tighter angle and more contrast between "the door" and the surroundings would emphasize your subject and give it a much more dramatic feels, as always just my opinion.


-pat

 

[Steve01]

How about emphasizing the "door".
The whole thing is to bright and too wide IMHO.


I hope you don't mind.

You definetly improved it over my effert

Thanks.
All I did was make the door the subject.

I think there are a lot of interesting things you can do with this image, experiment.