The fire starter...........

[Vaporous]

Thanks for looking

 

[tirediron]

Damn, there's never a drooling, tripping over your tongue smiley when you need one. Very nice work!

 

[bigtwinky]

I love the first one! Nicely done

I'm thinking her face in the second could be a bit underexposed, but then you could of been going for that.

 

[elemental]

Good background, great lighting (especially number one), great post processing. I might try to burn out the bright spot on top of the forehead in 1, but that's it. Lovely work with they eyes.

 

[.Serenity.]

In the first one the eye whites look very bright, it could be me, but it stands out alot from the rest of the photo. It could be what you are shooting for but for me it dosent seem to go with the photo.
Beautiful captures though. I like them.

 

[Arhy]

I don't like skin color on the first shot. It is kind of dirty..
On the second one mouth lives his "own" life.. Separately from woman.