The Hunt

[mindfloodz]

Just for you OverExposed

 

[Bynx]

This is what I meant by a tighter crop. The purple color of the eggs and the basket all tie together what is going on. Your crop has lost the meaning of the pic. Unless you saw the original you wouldnt know what was going on and what that purple thing was. It doesnt lend itself as a portrait shot since her face is mostly not visible so such a tight crop doesnt do it for me.

 

[mindfloodz]

agreed.. Thank you for taking the time to give me an example. I like it better the way you did it! It does tie together nicely. Is that cropped to 4x6?

 

[Bynx]

I just cropped it visually, but it is very close to 4x6. Just a little bit wider or a little bit shorter (1/4" or so) would give exactly 4 x 6 proportions.

 

[Over Exposed]

I like both edits actually

 

[mindfloodz]

I like them both too, but I think I favor the edit Bynx did. It ties it all together really well.

 

[Bgagnon127]

I think the first one is really cute, I just did one similar of my daughter. I would crop it in an 8x10 aspect ratio to bring the size of the girl larger in the shot since she's the focal point. Also, if you had it to do over again any time the background doesn't add anything to the shot like the fence, use a lesser depth of field to blur it. Good job though.