the rings

[jols]

not sharp enough. please help.
also got my camera in the shot.

bet i couldnt do that if i tried again ha ha

 

[Amnesic]

I don't really like it, there is too much in the shot and I can't even tell whats what. I think its just bit busy.

 

[Lorielle99]

yeah, one ring would have sufficed.

 

[dpolston]

It's a very busy shot. Way too much going on in it. The camera in the shot can be remedied by backing up and zooming in. Plus I'd try to find a better word than "invaded". Maybe "love" or "cherish"?